[SlayeZ]

Obvious mistakes and stuff but its a sketch woohoo


critique!

http://i498.photobucket.com/albums/rr345/BrawlSlayeZ/vng2.jpg

http://slayez.devian...ketch-256628658

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This post has been edited by SlayeZ: 04 September 2011 - 03:49 AM

[Energy]

you are so awesome, i wish i could draw like this T_T

[xKagurax]

Not bad, but if possible, try drawing both left arms thicker especially the male's to match his right arm.
The male's upper body doesn't seemed to match his lower body proportion. His eyes seemed unbalance as well.

The female is nicely done and accurate proportion. [Just the left arm is slightly too puny]

[All these are just my opinions and suggestions]

Other than that, yeah, it's nice. Love the fire effect on the male's right hand.
:thumbsup:

PS: I just added you in DA. So may I comment on your other sketches?

This post has been edited by xKagurax: 04 September 2011 - 06:55 AM

[Byuu.]

Yea my only critique is the proportions are messed up

the arms should be bigger, the face and cleavage on the girl are one sided

This post has been edited by Byuu.: 04 September 2011 - 09:10 AM

[SlayeZ]

go ahead, and yep, proportion is pretty bad on this one XD

I still like it for what it is, maybe ill fix it when I ink it..eventually! I had to be dragged to bed last night i drew soo much

This post has been edited by SlayeZ: 04 September 2011 - 11:49 AM

[Panik64]

still a very good drawing though! really nice work!

[SlayeZ]

More is coming, my artist block is goneeee woohoo

[King eXeD]

Needs bigger boobs.