[Kypski]

Effect is overused that it became annoying to watch. It's cool and nice looking effect but should only be use in a brief moment or for a certain sequence. It felt like a constant vomit of sunshine..not being mean or offensive but just giving my own criticism. Music is always up to the creator choice and up to my liberty to listen to it but it just doesn't mix well with the video.

I'm a bit confuse right now on whether this video is just 'gameplay' or a video of your skill. As people have so blatantly point out, there could be improvements on your aim. You should get more footage or edit the bad parts. If this was meant to be a gameplay video, then it serve it's purpose.

[Paradise]

tbh i think he/she just posts it here for views, every vid ive seen them post they post it leave it here and never respond. next time just nto gona open it and give it another hit

This post has been edited by Paradise: 14 August 2011 - 02:44 AM

[Sanzo]

Reading the chat in the vid was fun!
stacked and pity boost!
super duper effective effects!
i give -3/10!

[Malene]

I suggest everyone stop bashing and focus on constructive criticism whether or not the person reads it or not is besides the point. Consider this a warning

[SlayeZ]

.Trace, on 13 August 2011 - 02:19 PM, said:

Get better aim if you're going to record, it almost feels as if you miss on purpose.

blackyyy, on 13 August 2011 - 02:28 PM, said:

CHROMA KEYER. DONT USE IT.

-NoctiS, on 13 August 2011 - 03:42 PM, said:

Good effects, nice music, nice composition, horrible gameplay.

Suffertje, on 13 August 2011 - 09:48 PM, said:

Your gameplay doesnt fits the music, and like Trace said: work on your aim because you missed more bullets then you hit and with that i mean 75% of your ammo gone to waste. Also, the vid is kinda messy and you just overused pretty much effects. Overall 3/10

Sad Bridget, on 14 August 2011 - 01:59 AM, said:

i dont know why youre using smgs if you cant hit anything with them, maybe you should use a homing rifle, im sure that will work out better for you and it'll compliment the smash nicely hahahaha god i hate this game

Constructive.

This post has been edited by SlayeZ: 14 August 2011 - 10:41 PM

[Malene]

uninstall, on 13 August 2011 - 04:42 PM, said:

Your video is fucking unwatchable. Please don't use effects ever again.

dropship, on 13 August 2011 - 09:51 PM, said:

just go back to using AP, it's hard to watch you miss people running in straight lines

seriously @2:11, what the hell was that

.Trace, on 13 August 2011 - 10:01 PM, said:

Let's start a petition so Love Factor never plays with PEN again ^^

Paradise, on 14 August 2011 - 02:43 AM, said:

tbh i think he/she just posts it here for views, every vid ive seen them post they post it leave it here and never respond. next time just nto gona open it and give it another hit

Sanzo, on 14 August 2011 - 08:50 AM, said:

Reading the chat in the vid was fun!
stacked and pity boost!
super duper effective effects!
i give -3/10!

Not so constructive.

[SlayeZ]

Uninstalled said not to use the effect again because it made the video unwatchable.


badship said that love should use AP again because love cant aim well.


Trace agrees with badship


Parabad is just saying how love never checks back


Sanzo didnt like the gameplay


4/5 were constructive.

[Malene]

SlayeZ, on 14 August 2011 - 10:45 PM, said:

Uninstalled said not to use the effect again because it made the video unwatchable.


badship said that love should use AP again because love cant aim well.


Trace agrees with badship


Parabad is just saying how love never checks back


Sanzo didnt like the gameplay


4/5 were constructive.

When you say "Your video's fucking unwatchable. Please don't ever use effects again.", that's not constructive. That's called being flat-out rude. The majority of the comments made are just people being pricks.

[SlayeZ]

"Your video's fucking unwatchable. Please don't ever use effects again."

if Someone told me that the first thing that would go into my train of thought is:

"Video effect is bad, lets not use it for next video.

Same with the bad aim

"oh people really think im bad, okay ill get GOODER* Aim and become the best like no one ever was before i make another video, THEN THEY'LL EAT THEIR WORDS AND I SHALL RULE THE WORLD"

[Malene]

SlayeZ, on 14 August 2011 - 10:50 PM, said:

"Your video's fucking unwatchable. Please don't ever use effects again."

if Someone told me that the first thing that would go into my train of thought is:

"Video effect is bad, lets not use it for next video.

Same with the bad aim

"oh people really think im bad, okay ill get GOODER* Aim and become the best like no one ever was before i make another video, THEN THEY'LL EAT THEIR WORDS AND I SHALL RULE THE WORLD"

If you haven't noticed by now, not everyone has that mentality. People get offended easily.

[SlayeZ]

lol.

[.Trace]

My brothers, I must admit I have sinned. I judged this video without sitting through it and my comments were deemed rude. They were right. I never gave constructive criticism for this video and for that I'm ashamed. Please let me make up for it by giving it my best shot at rating this video, so that the maker can improve.

First of all, I must admit that I burst into tears when I first sat through the whole video. That is tears of joy as this video combines both excellent gameplay and great video editing. We must all agree that this montage should be considered the epitome of all montages, we should all learn from it and try to understand it. The choice of effects is really subtle in this one so they do not turn your attention away from the gameplay, it really showcases the video maker's mastery over Sony Vegas. His great editing skills are complimented by his amazing aim and knowledge of the game S4 League. Highlights of his aiming skills include from 0:20 to 0:35 where he manages to land an astonishing 8 hits combo, and from 2:06 to 2:21 where he manages to reach an 8 hit combo with 1 Smash Rifle magazine and 3 SMGs magazine. That's a total of 140 bullets out of which 8 found their target, which was moving in an unpredictable straight line. Mind you that's an incredible accuracy of 5.7142% over the period of 15 seconds.
How could I forget to mention my favourite part from 2:45 to 2:53 where he manages to maneuver through zero enemies, while picking up the fumbi and scoring an unpredictable touchdown, that turned the tables of the match by reducing their point difference by 1 reducing the pity from 0-4 to 1-4 making the filming of this video impossible.

Moving on to the music choice of this video, as soon as my ears were caressed by this wonderful music I instantly reached an eargasm that lasted from 0:00 to 3:35. I fell in love with the artist of the music as soon as this sweet melody came out of my speakers. For a moment I thought my speakers were broken and making parasite noises, so I had to plug in my headphones just to make sure that I'm not halucinating, and I was not. It sounded like a choir of angels came down from the heavens to bless us all with this masterpiece. The chorus of this song also gives a very precise description of the entire video as it consists of primitive screams and after a few screams you can make out the singer screaming to the top of his lungs "Black".

Another thing that surprised me is how this video combines a variety of different maps and mode released by the developers of the game, Pentavision. The transition from Tunnel to Tunnel really caught me off-guard. It was such a pleasant surprise to see someone spend time making their video, since you really went into the trouble of playing a bunch of matches and compiling only the best clips from every match into this video. It is an amazing feat of determination going through the trouble of playing every map in the game so that your video has map variety. I'm sure your fans will be pleased. Speaking of pleasuring your fans this particular video has 17 Thumbs Up and 12 Thumbs Down, while another one of your videos has 22 Thumbs Up and 19 Thumbs Down, which is a major improvement.

I hope you'll be able to keep these few comments in mind to further perfect your already perfect video editing and gaming skills.

[Suffertje]

Volt, get better @ cooking food to feed yourself :3

This post has been edited by Suffertje: 14 August 2011 - 11:38 PM

[box]

I want to know why people can't just give constructive criticism. Like it's so hard to leave out curse words in your post? reaaaally want to know. Unless you really are so stupid as to think these rude comments are actually constructive.

[SeoulHeart ♥]

Enough has been said yeah? People watched the video, people gave their "feedback"

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