[Ocean.]

Truthfully, I don't know what exactly to call this.
But it's epic.
A friend of mine and I wrote it a while ago,
so check it out~



Things that matter right now


Our hopes, our dreams


Seem to have faded


Our fears, our worries


Have grown


Our circle of friends


Seem to be out of touch


We no longer


Talk


Even though everything we say seems to be crazy, We still


Linger on


In the past


Though memories


Will be forgotten


Grief and hardship will be


Our daily lives. Know that in the future


God will be part of


The little time we spend. And that


Sin will be part of


Most of the time





So just pray.

Now read everything going bottom-up :D

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[Scarx14]

Wow that's really cool, nice job! :thumbsup:

[Rudette]

omg that was pretty epic the whole two-way reading thing!

[Serah.]

I liked it~ <3

[Rei]

That is pretty epic.
Though, I feel like I've seen that before...

[Byuu.]

only problem I had with it was the "will be forgotten part" i'm reading tha same thing twice with "will be" but other than that it sounds pretty awesome!

[JinNJuice]

Hence the "Sort of." part of the topic title. That was pretty nice, though a bit cliche.

[S⑨D]

I good title would be, perhaps:

'A prayer for the heart'

Kinda cheesy and pretty much a common name, but I think it fits, since all those things fit a part of the human heart and mind.