I am new, my poem.

I am new, my poem. My ode to music.

#1
KeitiX

Posted 15 March 2011 - 01:52 AM

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Music,Music
My music, my soul
Embrace me
As my eyes close
Drowning into
My gentle sleep
Flowing lyrics
Awakening
the inner soul
paradise world
filling all deep
wishes and hopes
dreaming of
demons and devils
as the genre
changes
into ignited screaming and
Banging drums
Enjoying the chase
of the evil
I then escaped
Into a fantasy world
With passionate vocal
That engulf the darkness
Left me light and breathings
Searching the emptiness
found
Doors to my
Fate and destiny
The melody led
me to heaven gates
drifting away
ditching my emptiness
I then asked
whats my crime
falling apart in all that I question
facing my consequences
As the lovely tone
wash away my sin
was I overracting
My own little world
zoned out
to my
feelings and emotions
flying so high
then said world without music is
Dark without light
High without Low
Left without Right
Black without white
Storm without clouds
Night without day
war without peace
veins without blood
Stop without starts
Sky without stars
Hot without Cold
Death without life
Truth without lies
Sun without moon
Hate without Love
Humanity without vestige path
Endlessly more
Dropping so low
''Beep, Beep, Beep,''
is all I hear
Oh what a tone
My friendly alarm gave
Greeting my morning with harmony
A hero's journey I experienced
From my sleep
What an adventure
Music brought me
Music, music
My music, my soul
Tell me
What will happen?
If one day
You vanished =(
Leaving me
Helpless, hopeless, and hurtful
Forever you'll be my peaceful soul mate
You're my reason
To live on
This corrupted
Society world

Source: Little Boots-Symmetry.

#2
zi0n

Posted 15 March 2011 - 03:17 AM

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dam good

#3
Kumo

Posted 15 March 2011 - 12:57 PM

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Not bad, except for your camparisons on a world without music. Truth and lies are opposites.. so truth without lies, is truth. So saying the world without music is like truth without lies, that is basically saying the world is better off without music. I understand you trying to express that the world without music is unbalanced though.

#4
Guest_zion's gf_*

Posted 15 March 2011 - 06:50 PM

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u rock

#5
KeitiX

Posted 15 March 2011 - 07:25 PM

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Random Scrub, on 15 March 2011 - 12:57 PM, said:

Thank you for your advice.

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Aye™

Posted 15 March 2011 - 09:25 PM

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Welcome to s5 Keiti <3 :3

and damn, ur notepad poem is fricking awesome.

I swear I can start a war whenever I feel like in danger when you are near cuz of jealousy :<

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KeitiX

Posted 15 March 2011 - 09:37 PM

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ayeawesome, on 15 March 2011 - 09:25 PM, said:

Welcome to s5 Keiti <3 :3

and damn, ur notepad poem is fricking awesome.

I swear I can start a war whenever I feel like in danger when you are near cuz of jealousy :<

Danke Aye! =3
You are awesome as well o: and don't be jealous because you can do the same! XD