[Malene]

New gameplay video, simple. It's been awhile since I've made a video so yeah~ Comments/Critique wanted

[Paradise]

Celestine, on 20 November 2011 - 01:29 AM, said:

New gameplay video, simple. It's been awhile since I've made a video so yeah~ Comments/Critique wanted

congrats on account back? or if you remade welcome back

another station 2 smash/rev/random non multi kill snipetage

i feel like you should try stepping out of your comfort zone when you work on your next project, i feel this was too reminiscent of all the other ones

i sat through it all but i doubt people will be too fond of seeing the same thing in almost every single other s4 montage

positives-good syncing/nice effects/title was cool to me for some reason

negative-no originality

[Malene]

Paradise, on 20 November 2011 - 02:12 AM, said:

congrats on account back? or if you remade welcome back

another station 2 smash/rev/random non multi kill snipetage

i feel like you should try stepping out of your comfort zone when you work on your next project, i feel this was too reminiscent of all the other ones

i sat through it all but i doubt people will be too fond of seeing the same thing in almost every single other s4 montage

positives-good syncing/nice effects/title was cool to me for some reason

negative-no originality

I'll try doing like BR and captain and stuff next video. Thanks for the feedback

[dropship]

like para said one of the main areas to address in a good montage (at least to me) is adequate killstreaks and not just spread out kills. you had a few decent ones but i'm sure you can improve off of that.

however i really didn't appreciate the syncing in this one, i mean it's good that there was syncing at all but the way you used transitions made the game seem waaaay slower than it is, which is too uncharacteristic of S4. also this is more of a gameplay thing but there was too much smash where there should've been rev, like you would get really close and still continue using smash until you ran out of ammo when you had a full rev clip waiting.

better than your other videos but you still have room for improvement.

This post has been edited by dropship: 20 November 2011 - 02:58 AM

[Outkast]

Paradise, on 20 November 2011 - 02:12 AM, said:

positives-good syncing/nice effects/title was cool to me for some reason

negative-no originality

This in a nuteshell

Celestine, on 20 November 2011 - 02:37 AM, said:

I'll try doing like BR and captain and stuff next video. Thanks for the feedback

Weapons as well. Switch up your set it literally looks like 80% of the community's set.

[Tawara]

Hg, SMG, Railgun it's the right way! Even me use that =)

Too much Station 2... But btw, you only need to use a bit more of Revolver, there is some scenes where ppl need a single shot of Revo to die and u used Smash Rifle (I hate SR xD).

Well... I like this type of gameplay =)

This post has been edited by Tawara: 20 November 2011 - 09:54 AM

[Sanzo]

Hmmm nah not worth it
:teehee:

[Mikki]

I liked it, Wish I was as good with effects etc. Nice Intro btw xD Only thing is basicly what para said.. Try some other weapons etc. Not just the same thing over and over

This post has been edited by .Evans: 20 November 2011 - 10:46 AM

[.Trace]

Things I liked:
*Video has 1080p HD option.
*Music was synched with the video for the most part.
*No Chroma Keyer
*Nice transitions and no frequent overused effects.

Things I didn't like:
*Lack of good gameplay clips, to be more specific:
1. Smash Rifle aiming can improve drasticly. You're recording at 60.00 FPS stable so it shouldn't have any effect on your aim, or atleast not so noticeable.
2. In my opinion if you're going to put sniping clips in a montage they need to be either Critical Hits or an insane and hard to pull off sniper shot mid-air.
3. Your clips are always one or two kills at most. Short clips are easier to pull off and give the montage a more "speedy" feel to it, however I don't want to watch shooting a target running in a straight line. Unless the short clip includes some amazing shots, I'd go with longer clips including killstreaks.
4. You could include a wider map variety, however it's not necessary considering how no one plays any other maps.

To sum it up, your editing and upload quality are quite good, yet you're seriously lacking in gameplay.

This post has been edited by .Trace: 20 November 2011 - 11:21 AM

[King eXeD]

Sanzo, on 20 November 2011 - 09:53 AM, said:

Hmmm nah not worth it
:teehee:

You always know what to say, old friend!

This post has been edited by King eXeD: 20 November 2011 - 12:06 PM

[Malene]

Outkast, on 20 November 2011 - 04:27 AM, said:

This in a nuteshell



Weapons as well. Switch up your set it literally looks like 80% of the community's set.

.Trace, on 20 November 2011 - 11:18 AM, said:

Things I liked:
*Video has 1080p HD option.
*Music was synched with the video for the most part.
*No Chroma Keyer
*Nice transitions and no frequent overused effects.

Things I didn't like:
*Lack of good gameplay clips, to be more specific:
1. Smash Rifle aiming can improve drasticly. You're recording at 60.00 FPS stable so it shouldn't have any effect on your aim, or atleast not so noticeable.
2. In my opinion if you're going to put sniping clips in a montage they need to be either Critical Hits or an insane and hard to pull off sniper shot mid-air.
3. Your clips are always one or two kills at most. Short clips are easier to pull off and give the montage a more "speedy" feel to it, however I don't want to watch shooting a target running in a straight line. Unless the short clip includes some amazing shots, I'd go with longer clips including killstreaks.
4. You could include a wider map variety, however it's not necessary considering how no one plays any other maps.

To sum it up, your editing and upload quality are quite good, yet you're seriously lacking in gameplay.

Thanks, I'll be sure to try these things on my next project.

[D3fender1429]

Liked the video =D. Wont be critical, cause i gots no room to talk xD.

[Malene]

D3fender1429, on 21 November 2011 - 07:08 PM, said:

Liked the video =D. Wont be critical, cause i gots no room to talk xD.

Thank you

[Outkast]

Celestine, on 20 November 2011 - 03:47 PM, said:

Thanks, I'll be sure to try these things on my next project.

Don't say it....then don't do it.

[Malene]

Outkast, on 21 November 2011 - 08:22 PM, said:

Don't say it....then don't do it.

lolk

[Kypski]

My own personal preference but there could be improvement with the sync in the music or if there was a better transition in between the clips. For some odd reason, my eyes started to get irritated from watching it repeatedly go from video clip and then pitch black screen.

The clips needs more excitement or skillful shots. I could already tell the game play was recorded in two or a few games. The sniping part was cut too fast or happened already even before I had the chance to see what's going on. Look forward to your next video!